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I think is good so far. Heres the Prologue.
Prologue
Everyone has something guarding them. Some people don’t even know of their existence. They don’t know until the guardians show themselves. There are a variety of guardians. Sprites, Fairies, Genies, and the occasional elf or giant. Some people get lucky and they come from nowhere because they did a good deed. But even though all the guardians want good some have magic. Magic does twisted things to humans minds. Especially the ones that are evil. It turns them into Lours. Lours are the people who became cruel and twisted because they found out of there guardians magic. They do horrible things. Even though most people go cruel and fight amongst each other, there is one fairy. His power is stronger then anyone else’s. This fairies name is Zyax.
Zyax’s duty was to train the mimic. The mimic is a person who is trained into knowing everything of the magical world, Magestica, the Dark Realm, and Earth. The mimic is also the person who gets all the power from Zyax once he or she finishes training. There is only one mimic now…And this is how the war between all realms started.
Tell me what you think about it pl0x
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I think is good so far. Heres the Prologue.
Prologue
Everyone has something guarding them. Some people don’t even know of their existence. They don’t know until the guardians show themselves. There are a variety of guardians. Sprites, Fairies, Genies, and the occasional elf or giant. Some people get lucky and they come from nowhere because they did a good deed. But even though all the guardians want good some have magic. Magic does twisted things to humans minds. Especially the ones that are evil. It turns them into Lours. Lours are the people who became cruel and twisted because they found out of there guardians magic. They do horrible things. Even though most people go cruel and fight amongst each other, there is one fairy. His power is stronger then anyone else’s. This fairies name is Zyax.
Zyax’s duty was to train the mimic. The mimic is a person who is trained into knowing everything of the magical world, Magestica, the Dark Realm, and Earth. The mimic is also the person who gets all the power from Zyax once he or she finishes training. There is only one mimic now…And this is how the war between all realms started.
Tell me what you think about it pl0x
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